Alcoholism is a problem in Chilean society, First many scientific studies show that Chileans have problems with alcohol, Chile is among the top ten of the countries that consume more alcohol. secondly the problem is difficult when consumers are underage. Alcoholism is a social problem that has several consequences, such as traffic accidents, domestic violence, addiction and health problems
In addition people seek to forget and pass the sadness by drinking alcohol, but once addiction becomes addictive it is very difficult to rehabilitate, because people become dependent and can not live without the consumption of an alcoholic beverage. Finally I think that measures should be taken on alcoholism, fine people who sell alcohol under age and increase the tax so that people become aware and consume in moderation, but certainly the Chilean society has a big problem with Alcohol consumption that should be treated to decrease addiction
Yeah alcoholism is a big problem in Chile. In january 1 a lot of people was sleeping in the floor. I don't understand "people who sell alcohol under age and increase the tax" what taxes? See you in classes
ResponderEliminarYou know very much about this Nicolas
EliminarRafael,
ResponderEliminarTS: Alcoholism is a problem in Chilean society,
SS1: First [,] many scientific studies show that Chileans have problems with alcohol,
EXP.Chile is among the top ten [of the] countries that consume more alcohol.
SS2: [s]Secondly[,] the problem is difficult when consumers are underage.
EXP:Alcoholism is a social problem that has several consequences, such as traffic accidents, domestic violence, addiction and health problems(NO RELATION WITH SUPPORTING SENTENCE?)
SS3?:[In addition] people seek to forget and pass [the] sadness by drinking alcohol,
EXP?:but once addiction becomes addictive[??] it is very difficult to rehabilitate, because people become dependent and can not live without the consumption of an alcoholic beverage.
SS4? C?:Finally I think that measures should be taken on alcoholism, fine people who sell alcohol TO MINORS [under age] and increase the tax so that people become aware and consume in moderation, but certainly the Chilean society has a big problem with Alcohol consumption that should be treated to decrease addiction[.]
Rafael,
Do not forget periods and full stops [.] Punctuation is necessary. Your structure was not so clear this time, although your grammar is fine in general terms.